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tl;dr - The move used in the last panel of page 11 was more visually confusing than I had intended it to be, so I am altering it to make the scene work a little better.

So, I was MOSTLY very happy with how page 11 turned out, and I am really gratified as always at the response to it. However, I've taken a few comments into consideration, and I have to agree with them.

As many of you know, in the original version of the comic, Sneasel was hoisting a boulder over his head behind Charlene. This was intended as a slight misdirection as in the next page he was going to lob the boulder - not at Charlene, but into the air - and kick through it in a variation of the Rock Smash move. (See also: Charizard on Smash Bros. Brawl.) However, the scene looked TOO much like he was going to throw the rock at her, which would be more along the lines of Rock Throw - a move Sneasel is incapable of learning. 

I also gave the characters and scene some thought and I came to the conclusion that a brute force attack really just doesn't seem much in line with the sneasel archetype. Using a boulder as a weapon seems more in line with Machamp or say... a golem. 

As a result, I've updated the scene, as you might well be able to see. Instead of hefting a boulder, Sneasel is preparing a Shadow Ball attack. And yes, I realize that's a Ghost move, not a Dark one; but it fits the scene, and an ice move hardly seems the most appropriate choice.

I would like to think that I'm capable of admitting when I made a mistake. I feel that correcting this now will save a lot of confusion later on. Don't worry, the story as a whole isn't drastically changed by this; just the minor detail of his sneak attack method.

I still have the original version of the page in my st.ash, which can be made available for download on request if desired.

Thanks for understanding this change, everyone; and I hope you'll continue to enjoy this chapter and my other works to come!

I'm curious... how did you guys originally find me, anyway? 

62%
113 deviants said A Pokemorph Stories comic.
18%
33 deviants said A random submission I liked.
7%
12 deviants said A friend told me about you.
5%
9 deviants said I knew you from FurAffinity.
4%
8 deviants said I knew you from outside of your artwork and comics.
3%
6 deviants said A Sapphire the White Dragon comic.

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Kat
Artist | Digital Art
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I'm a person looking to enhance her abilities in all kinds of different fields. Writing, drawing, music, and basically anything that allows me to express myself creatively. I have a lot of different furry perceptions of myself, the most dominant of which being Firelight. I LOVE hearing from people, even if it's idle conversation, and I am greatly interested in any advice to help improve upon what I'm doing.

For most of my drawings I use a Wacom Bamboo tablet. For my pencil sketches I draw tham in pencil and scan them in.

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i saw your YouTube page, it has 212 subscribers.
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Ryusuta 1 day ago   Digital Artist
Oh wow. I'm a little surprised it even has that many with how little I update it. ^^;
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Loyalty1998 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
YOU'VE BEEN HUGGED!! *Hug* ^_^
Spread the DA love around! (you can copy and paste this message on their userpage!)
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nonten4 6 days ago  New member
So are you a furry?



(I'm not)
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Ryusuta 6 days ago   Digital Artist
Yep.
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nonten4 5 days ago  New member
Wow, I've been watching your account for a while and now i piece tougher that your a furry... 
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Ryusuta 5 days ago   Digital Artist
Hm? How so?
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JohnSergal Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the fav!
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Ryusuta Apr 6, 2014   Digital Artist
My pleasure! I have a lot of respect for your work when I see it now and again. It's very creative and enjoyable. I do Pokemon art and comics as well, so it's always nice to see another take on the subject. In fact, I'll go ahead and send a watch your way. You seem like a nice person and quite talented. I look forward to seeing more of your work!
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JohnSergal Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much for such kind words, I try to meet them. I also love your Art.
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