tl;dr - The move used in the last panel of page 11 was more visually confusing than I had intended it to be, so I am altering it to make the scene work a little better.
So, I was MOSTLY very happy with how page 11 turned out, and I am really gratified as always at the response to it. However, I've taken a few comments into consideration, and I have to agree with them.
As many of you know, in the original version of the comic, Sneasel was hoisting a boulder over his head behind Charlene. This was intended as a slight misdirection as in the next page he was going to lob the boulder - not at Charlene, but into the air - and kick through it in a variation of the Rock Smash move. (See also: Charizard on Smash Bros. Brawl.) However, the scene looked TOO much like he was going to throw the rock at her, which would be more along the lines of Rock Throw - a move Sneasel is incapable of learning.
I also gave the characters and scene some thought and I came to the conclusion that a brute force attack really just doesn't seem much in line with the sneasel archetype. Using a boulder as a weapon seems more in line with Machamp or say... a golem.
As a result, I've updated the scene, as you might well be able to see. Instead of hefting a boulder, Sneasel is preparing a Shadow Ball attack. And yes, I realize that's a Ghost move, not a Dark one; but it fits the scene, and an ice move hardly seems the most appropriate choice.
I would like to think that I'm capable of admitting when I made a mistake. I feel that correcting this now will save a lot of confusion later on. Don't worry, the story as a whole isn't drastically changed by this; just the minor detail of his sneak attack method.
I still have the original version of the page in my st.ash, which can be made available for download on request if desired.
Thanks for understanding this change, everyone; and I hope you'll continue to enjoy this chapter and my other works to come!