The Quiet Girl (Raven - Rune Factory 3) *FIXED!*

Raven says very little, especially to strangers. She works at a blacksmith and carries a short sword, even though she abhors weapons. Her near silence and often dark expression sometimes lead people that don't know better to the mistaken impression that Raven is cold or uncaring. Little do they know the reason the quiet girl uses so few words. Raven carries with her a secret.

One day she meets a boy named Micah, who also has a secret...

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***I FIGURED OUT WHAT I WAS DOING WRONG WITH THIS!!!***

Okay, dig this. The human face - particularly the face of girls - has a sort of "3" symbol on the front - round at the forehead and round at the cheek. It also curves down to a rounded chin. The faces I've been doing on people have not had this very important shape, and have looked incredibly flat and indistinct as a result.

You might think that I'm joking, but I am VERY SERIOUS: this all came to me in a dream. Needless to say I bolted over to my computer and started fixing this IMMEDIATELY.

Now I finally feel satisfied with this.